I agree with the article putting more emphasis on Ferrari struggling, when in reality it was Vettel.
PZ makes all very good points. but I think writing the way he recommends would praise Lewis a little much (although he has clearly driven god like these last 2 seasons) it currently writes a story of Ferrari holding Vettel back and the title was gifted to Lucky Lewis. When in reality Lewis stuffed it down Ferrari's throat for having a has been partnered with an egg that cracks often.
edit: after reading my last sentence, I guess it is Ferrari's fault, they chose Vettel and Kimi.